Working on the script some more :3

The game as of now is missing a lot of character info/lore since it's just the first day in game, but I'm gonna try to add 2 more days and more info on the characters that you can find out through interacting with them. 

i've never written a VN before so I'm trying to figure out how soon i should uncover info, or what choices i should give and how to pace the story. I'm kind of a pantser when it comes to writing, though i do work with a vague outline lol.

Im also realizing idk how to write scenes that are one on one between the RO and player character. My personal fave scene is the one in the sunroom with Mabel and Alistair because i love how they annoy each other lol, but im trying to figure out how RO and PC scenes should work.

There's also some dialogue at the end that Mabel makes that was just there to be replaced later and i forgot to do that, its the bit about hand holding that's a little OOC for Mabel. And some Alistair scenes are gonna get edited too, and I want to figure out whens the best time to find out...more about him and who he really is lol. My fave thing with characters is when they are liars <3

anyways yeah thats it, i have a lot of things i want to do but i know that since ive never done a lot of this stuff its gonna be edited and redone a whole buncha times till i get somewhere that i like. but its fun :3

Okay. Bye! ^_^